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The Vixen and The Hedgehog CH. 10, Part 2.

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Portal Door

Treasure Planet

Saturday, June 30th; 9:10 p.m.

After the pirate passed through the trigger....nothing happened; however, Hiccup screamed “ALL PIRATES, GRAB WHAT YOU CAN CARRY AND GET THE HELL OUT!!! THE PLANET IS GONNA BLOW IN A FEW MINUTES!!! HURRY!!”. All the pirates began packing up as much treasure as they could possibly carry, started running through the portal, all while Hiccup and the others flew back to get Delbert and Mr. Arrow. Once they got to them, Delbert and Mr. Arrow got onto the ship, then Hiccup said “Captain, Delbert, Jim! I want you three to go with the pirates on the R.L.S. Legacy!”. They all looked at him in confusion and asked “Why, exactly?”, then Hiccup replied “One, to keep the pirates in check; two, to steer the ship; and three, Jim may be of assistance with how we’re going to get outta here!”. Hiccup flew the ship over toward the R.L.S. Legacy, let Jim, Delbert, and Amelia off where the pirates had already escaped to.

*KABOOM!!!*

The first blast set off and the planet immediately began breaking apart. Hiccup yelled “MR. ARROW! CAN YOU TAKE THE HELM?!”, Mr. Arrow replied “I GOT IT! WAIT WHAT ARE YOU....?”. Hiccup hit a button on the back of his scarf and a “Blue Star Mark II” from “Sonic Riders” appeared, then he set it up ready for launch; but, as he was beginning to mount the board, Renamon rushed over and said “Hiccup, wait....!”. Hiccup turned around to face her; but before he could ask her “what is it?”, she pulled on his scarf a bit to pull him down for a kiss. She broke the kiss and said “Promise me you won’t die on me!”, then he looked at her with a confident smile and said “Now that’s a promise....THAT I WILL NEVER BREAK!!”. As soon as he said the last word, he slammed his back foot on the board and it blasted off, then Renamon looked at Mr. Arrow and said “Follow him back to the portal!”. Then both ships turned around and headed straight for the portal, as Hiccup was heading towards the portal, he noticed Jim had the same idea.

The world around Hiccup suddenly seemed to slow down, and he felt a warm tingling feeling go up his spinal cord. He then taunted Jim saying “RACE YA!”, then bursted ahead; however, Jim followed close behind and they began racing for the portal remote. Jim thought of it as a serious race of life and death; but, Hiccup thought of it as a dream come true, because every time he saw this scene in the movie, he felt so connected and exhilarated. They were just at the 25 second mark, when Jim’s board got jammed; however, Hiccup immediately turned around and yelled “JIM!!”. He sped up as he dove for Jim and reached out to help him, then Hiccup yelled “GRAB AHOLD OF MY HAND!”. Without a second thought, Jim grabbed on and Hiccup pulled him onto his board. They immediately changed direction to go back up; but once they reached the top, Jim yelled “WE’RE ALMOST THERE!!!”. Just before B.E.N. began counting down from 7, Hiccup said “Chaos Control!”; but he didn’t move an inch. B.E.N. began counting down “7.... 6.... 5.... 4.... 3.... 2....” *DEET!* Hiccup had pressed the button for the Montressor Spaceport; however the door to there was already opened. Everyone made it out alive, Hiccup dropped off Jim on the Legacy, then went back to Captain Flint’s ship and landed. Immediately, Renamon ran over toward him, tackled him to the ground, and kissed him right then and there. As they continued to kiss, Renamon said telepathically “You had me worried! I thought I’d loose you!”, then Hiccup replied telepathically “No way! It’s gonna take more than a self-destructing planet to take me down!”. They broke the kiss and stood up, then he gave her a strong hug.

They went down to say “goodbye” to Silver; however, they got there just before Silver got into the long boat. They both hugged him and said “We’ll miss you!”, then Hiccup said “Promise us that you’ll never forget us, Okay?”. Silver said “I wouldn’t forget ya even if I tried!”, then Silver gave Jim the treasure to rebuild his mothers house. As Silver was just about to drop, the three of them simultaneously said “Stay outta trouble, you old scalawag!”, then Silver replied “Why, my three lads! When have I done otherwise?”, and happily laughed as he flew off into the sunrise.

~~That Night~~

Benbow Inn

Planet Montressor

Sunday, July 1st; 6:30 p.m.

Everyone was celebrating their safe return home; suddenly, Hiccup and Renamon began to disintegrate into digital coding. Hiccup said “Well, I guess our time here is up!”, then he walked over to Jim, hugged him, then said “I promise I’ll come back and visit someday soon!”. After the two of them said their “goodbyes”, they grabbed their bags of treasure and waved as they disappeared into their world.

~~Meanwhile~~

Hiccup’s House

Antelope, California

Sunday, July 1st; 7:00 p.m.

Hiccup’s Mother was pacing back and forth until....

*RATTLE*

The Xbox 360 began shaking vigorously, and out from it, Hiccup and Renamon emerged in digital pixels and codings. Hiccup’s Parents ran over and hugged both of them and said “We were so worried about you two! We didn’t know when you where going to come back out!”. They both reassured them, then Hiccup asked “Do you guys want to see what’s in these bags?”, and as Hiccup’s Sister came downstairs, he opened up the bag and the treasure they brought back glimmered with a bright golden light. They began to plan a party for the 4th of July.

~~3 Days Later~~

Hiccup’s House

Antelope, California

Wednesday, July 4th; 12:30 p.m.

Friends and family began piling up to the party, so full that the party went out front. Hiccup got everyone’s attention by hitting a glass cup, then he said “Attention everyone! I have two very important announcements to make! First, I will be putting on ‘Treasure Planet’ on a theatre sized screen out front because there have been a few ‘changes’ to the movie! Second....” before he continued, he had Renamon stand up, then he said “....I wanted to announce that Renamon and I have gotten engaged! We’ll be getting married in three days!”. Everyone began cheering, then they went outside to see the movie. Everything that happened while Hiccup and Renamon were in there had been shown in the movie, then when the movie was over, everyone went home!

~~That Night~~

Hiccup’s family got ready for bed; however, while Hiccup and Renamon were in bed, Renamon asked “Why did you choose to have our wedding in three days?”.

“Why not? After all, we’re not properly suited for a wedding tomorrow!” He replied.

“Well, I just feel as though it might be too long of a wait!” Renamon said.

Hiccup gave Renamon the sly eyebrow and said “I know the real reason why!”, then Renamon looked at him in surprise, which quickly turned into a sly look. She said “You read me like a book!”, then Hiccup got out of bed, opened up his door to make sure everyone was asleep, then he closed and locked his door. Hiccup’s Mother said “I know that he’s 19 years old; but, I still don’t feel completely comfortable with his choice!”, then Hiccup’s Father replied “Does it really matter if it makes us comfortable? As long as she makes him happy, then we’re happy!”. Hiccup’s Mother then turned around and asked “Did you just use my words against me?”, then Hiccup’s Father replied “Maybe!”. They joked around a bit before falling asleep. It was 11:30 p.m. when Hiccup and Renamon fell asleep.

End Of The Treasure Planet Special!
But The Main Story Will Continue!
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